Ayrayen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hurts Me Every Time]

Kept hoping for you to really push your voice, hoping for an all out voice. Never happened. But this is really good nonetheless, and as always, there is room for improvement. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. And also, this song screams for an electric guitar riff!

xWhitexFlamex responds:

Well at the time I was 16, and I have never had any formal training in vocals so I was in the early stages of my voice and didn't have much of a push then. But thank you, if you have the time check out my other acoustic tracks. "As they All Fall..." has a solo and is a couple years newer.

[<pixel> Village in the Cave]

Ahh another underrated Musician who makes pure art. How amazing to stumble upon something as artistic as this.

Hope you don't quit on chiptune styled music, you have a thing for it. And I love it.

trixelbit responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm gonna keep making music for a long time. Definitely have a lot of ground to cover in musical development :D.

[Action/Motivation]

This reminds me a little about the Fancy Pants adventure Theme hehe.

I love it!

kanashibarimusic responds:

I had to youtube it, but I see what you mean. acoustic guitars and hip hop breaks are among the winningest combinations.

Thanks!:)

[Falling Star]

Heya!

I think this is a very catchy and a very sweet song!

The beat is just perfect, and the song is pretty chill to listen too in my opinion. The melody is very nice as well.

There is room for improvements as well.
On a personal preference I would like to suggest that you let the guitar start off alone. And let it build up. Either that, or make the intro more 'unique' in some way.

Overall, very nice melody!
I like it, here's your five stars pal!
Good job---

Sykozealot responds:

I'm super late on this...But I never thanked you for the positive feedback on this song

It was one of my first works in which I had a breakthrough both in playing guitar and learning to master recording and using VSTs as well...I remember this being one of the first times I actually was happy with the amount of bass I had and its wasn't extremely muddy

[Street Fight]

I like it, it's catchy- But what stops it from becoming perfect in my opinion is the drums, they could've improved.
From a personal preference, I would like them to be faster.

But the guitar was awesome, love it!
You are underrated.

Sykozealot responds:

I am a guitarist that is my instrument however as for drums I can keep a beat and put a roll here and there I'm no drummer I also play bass guitar so when ever the drums are lacking it doesn't bother me as much as long as the thing I'm supposed to be good at sounds good ^^ glad you liked it

[Agents of STUD]

I really like it.

Well done ^_^

BurntOutOnlineMedia responds:

Thank you for the kind words. Glad you liked it. I have more coming soon.

[Zafrece - Sky line]

I don't know what feelings you tried to express here but i just feel sadness.
Sadness and sorrow, depression in life.
I like it.

It's a musical piece like this that i rarely find anymore, but wait what? It's one right here.

Thanks for sharing this musical art to us.

I like the fact that it is techno trance style and still yet delivers this feeling towards us, me.

I must ask though, what were your intentions/feelings for this?

5/5

Zafrece responds:

We now enter the joys of subjectivity and how sound relays emotion in different ways. =) Personally I tried to make this song convey a feeling of anticipation if you will. The feeling of waiting for something around the corner or horizon yet you don't know what events may lie in the direction your choices take you. Thank you for your kind words, and i'm glad my music was able to stir some sort of emotion out of you. There is no greater happiness that words can bring me than some one telling me that a song of mine brought up or conveyed a certain emotion to them.

[RGH: Parasitic Rival]

I like this very much!

It has this mystic, angry and cool feeling into it.
It's short and nice with many variations into it.
I like it =)!

RyeGuyHead responds:

mystic, angry, and cool...yea that pretty much describes me :D

[Rise Above the Eternal--_]

It's great!

I hope you played the game StarFire!

That's how i found this one, nice man!

PERVOK responds:

I probably did when my music was first used in the game :) It's been a few years, haha.